NinjaOnShrooms's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[fake]

Wow, this has potential to be something great. I really think you need to rework this track and master the vocals better. It is repetitive too but honestly I'm really not hating. You're mixing genres in a brilliant way. The chorus was beast the slow dark dub with influence from metal worked great.

eRox1661 responds:

ha ha thanks man and thanks for the advise :D

[Insomnia]

Awwwwww C'mon, that ending, it was just getting good.
I really like the song, its pleasant and soft, the transformation was really nice, but not to sure about the exact sound of the rock/ish instruments with the rest of the song. Really wish there was a few more riffs before it just cut off too.
Vote 4, Stars 3.5

Maxo responds:

Ahh sorry about the ending, it's cruel, I know. If i were to rerecord it, I'd use all real instruments. Thanks for listening though!

[Happy Birthday Whoever]

"Happy birthday,
to whoever
I hope I'm not too late"
I was actually digging it up till after this point.
You have a really nice voice and all but I just dont get where this was going.
Put some more work into it and your voice will do you well.

jazmik responds:

I was thinking about altering the lyrics to ''but you will still be here.''
The idea being that this person is suffering from Alzheimer and is wishing himself a happy birthday, knowing he will no longer recognize himself in the mirror sooner or later.

[Buy My Book]

I really liked where this was going, the beat is bouncy and easy to follow, just threw me off a bit with the range of the vocals. If they hadnt gone in the high pitches it would be much better I think but this is really fresh. Really makes me bob to it.

D34DM4N responds:

You're right, it was a bad call on my part. I ran out of samples and didn't want to go find more to rip. Otherwise I'd have continued the mock story.

I liked the beat too though; that turned into my "Dragon Hoary Boar" track :P ramped the bpm up to 140 to make it chiptune dance. Here it's only 100bpm

[Smoke]

Story time:
So im cleaning my room while browsing NG for all the new music (trust me cleaning this room is not a small task). So I'm listening to this song and as I go to take a trash bag out I miss one of the steps outside my door and fall right on my face...Then I realize my head is still bobbing to the beat with this and I'm like "damn, this a pretty good song"
True Story
Really though, great song.

gavkay21 responds:

Haha That was great story bro

[Number One (hardstyle)]

Its a start.

You say Djing, did you mean producing? I only ask because this doesn't sound like a mix.
Its not a bad track by any means so don't think I'm hating but the sounds/plugins/synths you used are a little off, they don't have that crisp electric stab of most plugins used in harder styles. Do some more change ups through out the song and try playing with freq of the plugins occasionally to add a feel of changes.
Again, not hating. You say you're new to this so I'm just trying to give some feedback.
Keep it up.

knonamebass responds:

Yeah this song is not a mix, so I suppose I did mean producing. Though I DJ as well (and I'm much worse at it...) As far as the synth's I was just using the pre-loaded software instruments off of GarageBand, so they didn't really have one that was just right for a harder sound. I will try to rework this, as well as my others, but this was made in just a few hours. Thanks for the feedback!

[-World War III- half mix]

Credits

The song is great, I dont want to sound mean or schooling or anything but if you do work on someones music I think you should have at hand their name. I mean, who knows how much work they put in to it to be unrecognized. Just saying, great song though

SolidSHAKEgo responds:

ill find it no worries. its somewhere between pages 25 and 45. but thank you.

[Drop it Down.]

Wow

Seriously man, Great flow to this, slow and dark.
5/5 10/10

Marr-One responds:

Hey thanks a lot! I appreciate that.

[Squared]

Undeniable Flow

ChroniMC for president

ChroniMC responds:

Thanks : )